Happy Monday! Here is an excerpt from the novel I'm working on. This scene is basically a dating fear--boyfriends' moms. Most are fine and normal. Moms are people just like anyone else. However, just like all people, some are awkward. Jaisa's ex-boyfriend's mom would definitely be one of the latter. It also includes two of my favorite things about high school: basketball and puff paint.
I’m not
so sure Mikah’s family loved me. He’s an only child and his dad drives a truck
so he’s gone all the time and Mikah’s mom is hard to talk to. Like really hard.
Once I rode with her to one Mikah’s away basketball games. Never did it again.
She
picked me up. “Hi, Mrs. Craven. Thank you so much for picking me up,” I said,
putting my seatbelt on.
“Hi,
Jes-uh.” Mikah and I had been dating for two years at this point. Granted, this
was only, like, the fifth time his mom and I’d talked, but she had been
watching me run and hearing people scream my name at meets for two years, she
should know how to pronounce it. Jay-suh. It’s not that hard.
Mikah had
suggested I ride with her. I thought it would be a good idea. Help make me part
of the family. Mikah had fit right in with my family the moment we started
dating. Why wasn’t I a part of his? My family's really important to me and so
was Mikah. I wanted both important pieces to know each other. Not the story on
his side.
Riding
with his mom, two blocks from my house: “Mikah said Louisville is pretty good
this year,” I had said, trying to start a conversation. I looked down at my
black shirt covered in puff paint. Some of the other girlfriends and I made the
shirts the week before. Sideline Sweeties scrawled across the front and Craven
11 decorated the back. I picked at some of the puff paint.
She
didn’t respond.
Ten
blocks from my house we passed a new Scooter’s that was being built on one of
Landview’s main streets. “I’m excited for the new coffee place. Do you like
Scooter’s?”
“I just
drink what we have at work.”
“I’m not
a big coffee person, but when Mom and I go to Omaha to go clothes shopping she
always gets a skinny vanilla latte and I get a green apple Italian soda. We’ll
be heading to Omaha next weekend to get my Winter Royalty dress.”
Nothing.
A mile
from my house: “So how is work?” I ask.
“It’s
work.”
“I don’t
quite know. Mikah said you do finances for Super 8?”
“Yes,
he’s right I do.”
Two
miles from my house. We were finally on the highway. “What do you do with the
finances?” I asked.
“I do
the hotel’s bills.”
Eight
miles from home: “So, do you like going to basketball, cross country or track
better?” I asked.
“Oh,
they’re all the same,” she said.
“But
don’t you like being outside for track?”
“Not
when it rains.”
“So
basketball.”
“They
all have hard bleacher seating and it’s all the same parents.”
“Bleacher
butt does suck.”
She
didn’t respond. Ten miles from home I gave up and stared out the window for the
next fifty miles. The ride home was just as eventful. When we first started
dating, Mikah had been similar to his mom. I had to prompt questions. The more
he started hanging out with my family, though, the more he got in on our
conversation starters. At dinner, Dad, Mom (before she left), Bryce and I all
go around the table and say our lows and highs of the day. After Mikah had
eaten supper with us a few times, he and I started doing that on the phone at
night. Toward the end he started to forget to ask. Maybe I should have seen the
break up coming.
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